18/03/19 - Monday |Feedback from others + Annotating

My account couldn't send my printing data to the printer today as well. I visited I.T to get it fixed, however that would be too time consuming. I used my peer's computer too print my sheets instead. I stuck them on to my sketchbook and annotated the pages.

Today is the Pitch presentation, so I did some last minute editing for the power point, added extra information to finalise the document.

many people liked my idea, however they said I had yet to develop it with context and research of art-style and inspiration. I had few things to consider through the peer assessment. It really inspired my to see other people working on a full fledged film or show and working on few parts. I the post it notes on my sketchbook.

One of the comments suggested me to have a gourmet town, a town focusing on food and the bakery being included as one of the shops of the town. I really liked that idea, so i'm going to develop as my context in my pitch bible and proposal.